Jubel and The Unessential

I’ve just found an interesting service on the internet. Have anyone of you ever wonder that there is college admission essay service online for you? You can check this out: AdmissionEssays.com. It is a service, a very unique one, that offers us a admission essay development service. It organizes our own personal information including (work history, organization activities, hobby, personal life, vision, dreams, etc) into full and complete college application essays. Can you imagine that? Your completely custom model admission essay is drafted from scratch based on your personal facts, delivered in 7 business days, with a price of $299.00/essay.

I don’t really interested in that kind of service to be honest. But, they have another service which I think is good enough to be considered, “Essay Critique and Edit for College”. That’s for us who already have written our own college application essays, but expecting second opinions about the contents, diction, structure, and of course about its one-of-a-kind-ness. We will let them critique, analyze, and proofread them to make them truly stand out, with a price of $179.00/essay. In addition to proofreading for grammatical and syntax errors, they will provide us a comprehensive review and recommendations on the essay with a focus on flow, voice, and cohesiveness. They will give us a detailed commentary on the strengths and weaknesses of our existing essay, and will make specific recommendations on how to highlight your essay’s strengths and eliminate its weaknesses.

I will prefer to write anything on my own first. But I’m open to any viable kind of help, I guess.